12.02.03: Toxic Beauty
black ink on my skin
0/30 - Overall Design:
Boo. Where do I start? It's poorly coded, you use a bmp (aka kill me, I use bmps) as your main image, it's spaced strangely, and I noticed that you use really fucked up punctuation. For example: was'nt instead of wasn't, which is actually the correct way. It's not cute. It isn't vogue. Cut it the fuck out. See? I gave you a few examples of correct ways to punctuate conjunctions. Learn from my snotty comments. LEARN.
0/20 - Functional:
God, I hate your layout. I really do. It's ugly. It's ugly. And, to top it all, it's really fuckin' ugly.
0/10 - Aesthetic:
Ha hahahahahahahaha.
0/20 - Navigation:
Noooo. It's tiny. It's dark gray on black on white, (what the fuck were you thinking?), it's awful.
5/10 - Originality:
Okay. I haven't seen anything this hideous before, so five originality points. I took off for the angst. The black and white (BMP you spawn of satan) image of the chick with writing on her arm and taped edges just seems so dark, poetic and angsty. Three pretty trendy things in the diary world. You follower.
0/10 - Browser Compatible:
Fuck no. Absolutely not.
Total: 5/100 Yeah, it's that bad. It's Fuckin' Ugly.
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