01.03.04: Hell x Within
Save me from myself
15/30 - Overall Design:
You've got a solid base of good images. I hate the scroll bar, and I hate your navigation, it's squished into a tiny little table, and looks generally crappy. Expand the table, lose the scrolls, and make the pretty fairy picture a fixed background image using css. Email me or leave a note if you do not know how to do that and want to.
15/20 - Functional:
It's decent. Everything is easy to see, but the navigation is funky, and there's extra stuff at the end of your entries. I hate inline scrolls.
10/10 - Aesthetic:
You have a great image, good color combinations, and you've mixed it with futuristic spaceball style text. all in all, it fits, and it fits well. Just lose that hideous scroll bar, and you're all set.
10/20 - Navigation:
It's organized, and simple, but it looks like crap in that tiny table. I would also consider moving your comments link to the bottom of each entry. There's a reason everyone else does it; it makes chronological sense.
5/10 - Originality:
I have seen this image before. It's good, though, and you've clearly added to it by using the font and colors that you've chosen.
5/10 - Browser Compatible:
Eh. So/so.
Total: 60/100 Strong base, could use improvement. Get back to me if you want a five minute crash course in css.
before & after
