02.05.04: burning angel
any old actress _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
25/30 - Overall Design:
It's a rock solid design, which you already know. Your colors are good, everything fits together, but the graphic of the woman srikes me strangely. I can't get passed the idea that she looks as though her girl parts are emitting beams of light. I wouldn't take off for that per se, but it's very distracting, and slightly disconcerting.
20/20 - Functional:
Def. You don't have a whole hell of a lot of links in your navigation, because you're a smart cookie, and broke them up into pages. If only people (like me) could figure out how to do the same.
5/10 - Aesthetic:
I don't like how the woman's legs overlap your navigation table. I would make it look as though they just continue on behind it, instead of having that edge. I like the smoky effect, but if you could brush that out to eliminate that edge, I would like it more. I still can't help but think it looks like someone is shining a flashlight up her skirt, or that her ass is on fire, but you know, that's just me. If you're into that sort of thing, go to town. You might consider making the color of your entry area a bit darker or lighter than your background color, just to make it stand out a bit more. The pink is fine, because it isn't a loud or painfully bright shade of pink.
15/20 - Navigation:
I said before that you were a smarty pants and broke up your navigation, but ... it's all stuck on one page, and beyond that you have no other links, just old-new-guestbook-blah, which is fine and dandy, but a bit dry. It seems as though you don't have a whole lot by way of content, and shoot, I could be wrong, but guess what? I'm not reading your diary.
10/10 - Originality:
I have never seen anything like this before.
10/10 - Browser Compatible:
Definitely.
Total: 85/100 It's the glow in the dark coochie that gives me pause.
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